i like this poum one rezen because i really like your riming like you rime every line with the one on top of it and i think that is cool. I also like how it says i am going to bed in the day and getting up at night it is a good poum.
Going to bed in the day thts crazy. But the song is really good its sothing for babys and it has beat and it ryhmes. Robert loius steteveonson is a good song writter!
the poem is about a boy and sleeping. winter is in the poem at the very begining and then summer starts. its all about summer then on. i liked the part when candle light it rymed which i liked
The poem was ok but i thought that he could of put more discription in it but other than that i liked it. The poem was about a boy and sleeping and winter and summer and it went from winter to summer.
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i like this poum one rezen because i really like your riming like you rime every line with the one on top of it and i think that is cool. I also like how it says i am going to bed in the day and getting up at night it is a good poum.
ReplyDeleteGoing to bed in the day thts crazy. But the song is really good its sothing for babys and it has beat and it ryhmes. Robert loius steteveonson is a good song writter!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the days when i want to sleep 24/7 mostly the days in summer give me memories to think of when i read this poem.
ReplyDeletefrom: andrew that was agreat poem
ReplyDeletei love the words there super detailed
but 1 thing what was it about a little
boy? plesa writte back!
the poem is about a boy and sleeping. winter is in the poem at the very begining and then summer starts. its all about summer then on. i liked the part when candle light it rymed which i liked
ReplyDeleteI like the poem because its smooth:]
ReplyDeletei think that this poem really show you what he sees and hears!!!!!
ReplyDeletei really like this poem
The poem was ok but i thought that he could of put more discription in it but other than that i liked it. The poem was about a boy and sleeping and winter and summer and it went from winter to summer.
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