I really like your poem, but the main thing I like about it is you didnt always but somtimes rimed every second line to, make it flow good. It was a great poem.
The poetry is such a discriptive story. i think its goning to encoregd some boys and girls that have a river or a lake in there back yard. they might get a small boat and do the same thing. thats what i would do, because he wants other children to find that boat play with it and set it back down the river or lake
When I read this post. My thought was that a little boy was lost. And was finding his way back home. It was and nice relaxing poem that I injoyed very much. I think the poem was written in the 1900's or more. Because it said mill and mills were found in the 1900's or further on in history. The poem was awesome.
When I hear the peom it makes me think of a book called the chocolate river rescue. My favorite part of it is when he used good describing words. It really set a good piucture in my head.
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the poem has good ryhmes and it goes in order
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem, but the main thing I like about it is you didnt always but somtimes rimed every second line to, make it flow good. It was a great poem.
ReplyDeletethe dark brown water reminds me of the chocolate river reauscue
ReplyDeletewhen i read this post my first thought was, wow that reminds me of my Ompa who was a fisherman on Grandmanan.
ReplyDeletePs. Ompa means grandfather
The poetry is such a discriptive story. i think its goning to encoregd some boys and girls that have a river or a lake in there back yard. they might get a small boat and do the same thing. thats what i would do, because he wants other children to find that boat play with it and set it back down the river or lake
ReplyDeleteWhen I read this post. My thought was that a little boy was lost. And was finding his way back home. It was and nice relaxing poem that I injoyed very much. I think the poem was written in the 1900's or more. Because it said mill and mills were found in the 1900's or further on in history. The poem was awesome.
ReplyDeleteWhen I hear the peom it makes me think of a book called the chocolate river rescue. My favorite part of it is when he used good describing words. It really set a good piucture in my head.
ReplyDeletei realy like this poem because
ReplyDeleteit gives me a good picture of the story
in mind
i thought that the poem was ok but at first i thought the poem was about a kid that was a sailer and wonted to come home to his family
ReplyDeletei really love this poem so much
ReplyDeleteThe poems makes me think of the shyeny water
ReplyDeletei like how it goes together so nicely
ReplyDeletethe poem had a all kinds of differnt meanings but i still got what it meanted
ReplyDeleteit was an awesome poem.
ReplyDeletein the poem when it said dark brown river it reminded me of the choclate river
ReplyDeleteI like the poem it is so awesome.:)
ReplyDeleteI like the poem and it is so awesome.
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